From last time, I stood up in this video compared to my others. From my feedback from last time, I focused more on the coffee ATM itself than the time it takes to get to and from classes while trying to get a decent coffee. What stood out to me as important was the machine itself. Going into what you can order and how you can customize your beverages is a must.
Hi, I think you pitch was very well improved and that you properly responded to your feedback with the appropriate adjustments for your pitch. Standing up shows commitment and lets your audience know you mean business and demands attention. Your delivery was much better and in response, the audience will follow along much more easily. After three times I think you have hit the sweet spot.
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ReplyDeleteI think you pitch was very well improved and that you properly responded to your feedback with the appropriate adjustments for your pitch. Standing up shows commitment and lets your audience know you mean business and demands attention. Your delivery was much better and in response, the audience will follow along much more easily. After three times I think you have hit the sweet spot.