From the feedback I received from my last pitch, I saw that there were questions about how to customize your drinks. I clarified on what you can do when ordering through the cell phone app and online in this pitch. Other than that little tweak, all the comments I had received from my last pitch were all so very nice and positive! Everyone seemed very excited about my idea and could relate quite easily.
Hi Remi, I think your elevator pitch has improved a ton! You did include more specifications, as was asked about last time. I also think your presentation skills are very strong, and you aren't using a ton of crutch words. My only suggestion would be professional dress, if this is supposed to mimic a real professional elevator pitch.
Remi, Although I don't know anything about coffee it is obvious you do. You show your passion about coffee and knowledge of all the different variations and possible ways to sell it. Your pitch shows confidence, knowledge, and passion which are al needed to start a business. I think it is a great pitch and great idea.
Hi Remi, I think your elevator pitch has improved a ton! You did include more specifications, as was asked about last time. I also think your presentation skills are very strong, and you aren't using a ton of crutch words. My only suggestion would be professional dress, if this is supposed to mimic a real professional elevator pitch.
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ReplyDeleteAlthough I don't know anything about coffee it is obvious you do. You show your passion about coffee and knowledge of all the different variations and possible ways to sell it. Your pitch shows confidence, knowledge, and passion which are al needed to start a business. I think it is a great pitch and great idea.